Q5
Photography/Models
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“Your images are also really nice and contrast
well with the colour scheme” – Sharay (Contents Page) -
Genre
I decided to make my genre hip hop and r&b with the
sub-genres and a global element of grime and others to attract my target
audience as these are genres I enjoy, and I know people who I surround myself
with also enjoy, and we would be a part of my target audience therefore it
would directly attract and relate to their interests.
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“It looks like a Hip Hop music magazine from a
glance” – Antonia (Front Cover) – attracted my audience as my magazine is aimed at
hip hop and R&B fans, so by designing it to obviously highlight the genre,
it will catch my audience’s eye among other magazines and will lead them to
want to read it.
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“This looks like a real Hip Hop music magazine”
– Antonia (Contents Page) –(same as above)
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“See the features and the regulars like XXL” –
Antonia (Contents Page) – the familiarity of typical conventions of a hip hop magazine
on my magazine attracted my audience as they could clearly see that it was a
hip hop magazine
Contents
Layout
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“This contents page is very well laid out” –
Ruben (Contents Page)
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“The layout is neat and formal” – Sharay
(Contents Page)
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“The layout is really nice” – Sharay (DPS)
Colour Scheme
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“I like how your cover star contrasts with your
colour scheme making stand out from the typography and background” – Sharay
(Front Cover) –
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“I like how the colour scheme is also continued
into your contents page”- Sharay (Contents Page) – Tried to attract the audience by
keeping the colour scheme consistent on the contents page, so there is a sense
of familiarity + makes the magazine look professional as its as if the colour
scheme represents the HU$TLE brand (like how XXL keeps the red, white and
black)
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“ I like how the colour scheme exposed the
magazine to both genders” – Laily (Front Cover) – I attracted both genders of my
magazine successfully, as it has been pointed out that the colour scheme
attracts males and females, which is what I had aimed to do, as my magazine is
aimed at females but also wants a male reading – since most magazines are aimed
and read more my males, having my colour scheme attract both genders to fit in
with my audience is a main point.
Editing
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“Your
signature which makes the contents page look professional” – Sharay (Contents
Page) – by
adding the extra conventions of a magazine, such as the signature, I added to
the sense of professionalism in the contents page which would attract my audience
as it looks like a real magazine (along with the social media links,
subscription price etc.)
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“It looks so good and very appealing to the
eyes” – Monika (Front Cover) – Again, the editing has made it look good and like an actual
magazine, which attracts my audience.
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“It looks very professional” – Emanuel (Front
Cover)
Typography
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“Masthead is effective as it is positioned
behind your cover star” – Sharay (Front Cover) – Attracts my audience as then
my cover star is able to stand-out and catch
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“I like how your cover star contrasts with your
colour scheme making stand out from the typography and background” – Sharay
(Front Cover) -
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“I also like how you have highlighted specific
words its very effective” – Sharay (DPS) – the manipulation of my typography
seemed to attract my audience, as they weren’t drawn to the highlighted words,
which was my aim.
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“Your pull quotes are also effective and make
your magazine look professional” – Sharay (DPS)
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“Like that the questions are capitalised and in
a different colour” – Sharay (DPS) - the manipulation of my typography seemed to attract
my audience, as they weren’t drawn to the highlighted words, which was my aim.
Really detailed feedback, well done! Make sure to proofread this and put into the technology. Jo
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