First Draft Feedback Evaluation

In yesterday's lesson we were asked to give and receive feedback from our classmates. During the lesson I received feedback and used this to better my work.
For example, my classmate Sammi gave me this feedback for my front cover:

From this I saw that she was correct about the colouring of the text and Angel therefore, using this feedback, I added a drop shadow to the text to make it stand out therefore easier to see on the grey background and got rid of the double effect on the main headline to avoid the blending in:


Also, she gave me feedback on my double page spread:


From this I did move the text box away from the centre by a small margin to avoid it getting cut off. I also tried different pictures for the first page of my DPS but I could not find one that went as well so I kept that.